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Example 4:

Name: Reanne Chin Xin Yuen Class : J11 (J1A)

Titile : My Pet Animal

Pets are not merely animals living with us. They become a part of our family because
of the sheer comfort we get from them. I have always wanted a pet and my mother bought a

puppy for my birthday present last year.
She was the most adorable and beautiful puppy I ever seen, and taking care of her
became my responsibility. It was a suitable breed and had soft paws, which was a sign of
expensive breeding call Pomeranian. We decided to name our new puppy, Lily.

Lily had white fur and short ears. Her big eyes were always joyful and she was a bundle

of joy. Her white fur shone in the sunlight as she ran about in our lawn. She loved eating roasted

chicken and her dog food. At night, she would cuddle up in my bed next to me and go to sleep.

My father had created a small area for Lily, but she never slept there. She loved sleeping

next to me at night. Lily was an active dog. She loved to go on walks, and we took her to the

field twice a day. She became very popular among my friends, and they adored her.

Caring for a pet becomes difficult. We must take care of them and make sure they visit
the vet regularly. We must look out for ticks and other skin infections. Maintaining a pet comes

with many responsibilities, and do what is best for our pets.

Example 5:

Name: Sam Xin Bey Class: J11 (J1A)

Story based on pictures given in class.

Title: The Maid

Mr Tan had an Indonesian maid by the name of Mirami. Mirami was a very hardworking

and honest maid. Everyone in the family liked her very much for her pleasant personality. One
day, Mirami woke up earlier than usual. She went to the kitchen to prepare breakfast. She put
the kettle to boil.

Suddenly, she heard some sounds coming from the backyard of Mr Tan’s house. Mirami
was not afraid. She immediately took the stick and tiptoed to the backyard. She could hear the
sound again. Then, she hit the figure hard on the head with the stick.
The man shouted loudly as he was in pain. When Mirami looked carefully at the man, she
was realized it was Mr Tan. It turned out that Mr Tan forgot to lock the backyard door, so he
woke up immediately when he remembered and came down to lock the door.

Mirami apologized to Mr Tan repeatedly. Mr Tan laughed and told her not to worry.
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